7-4-8-2 (prologue through ch. 4)

[missingme15]

Story Title: Seven-Four-Eight-Two
Genre: Future, Sci-Fi
Year: Unspecified (between 2050 and 2150)
Setting: A typical futuristic society
Rating: PG 12+
Description: A teenaged girl, given animal-like reflexes and instincts through surgery and drugs, has been held in captivity for most of her life. One night, she gathers the strength and courage she needs to escape. But she soon learns that getting free and staying free are not quite the same.

Here's the URL of the prologue: thesims2.ea.com/exchange/story_detail.php?asset_id=205704

Here's the URL of Chapter One: thesims2.ea.com/exchange/story_detail.php?asset_id=210555

Here's the URL of Chapter Two: thesims2.ea.com/exchange/story_detail.php?asset_id=211022

Here's the URL of Chapter Three: thesims2.ea.com/exchange/story_detail.php?asset_id=214081

Here's the URL of Chapter Four: thesims2.ea.com/exchange/story_detail.php?asset_id=217396

My username there is the same as it is here, if, for whatever reason, you want to know.

Well, enjoy the story, I'd apprectiate some honest feedback and opinions. Please, no, "Ooh, that was good!" or, "I don't really like this," posts. Be specific about what you liked, didn't like, what I should edit, and how I can improve in the future. Thank you, and enjoy the story.

P.S. I know the plot is a little cliche, but I tried my best to make it by own.