A Crime in Pleasantview

[tom05liverpool]

Hello,

I would really appreciate it if you could take the time to read the first two chapters of my new series, 'A Crime in Pleasantview.' I've worked really hard on these, and are my first attempt at a mystery style story. Thanks so much. ;D

Chapter 1:
thesims2.ea.com/exchange/story_detail.php?asset_id=214019

Chapter 2:
thesims2.ea.com/exchange/story_detail.php?asset_id=214455

Thanks so much, feedback would be really appreciated.

Bye

[Rose]

A Crime in Pleasantview was a really great read! I can see how hard you worked on the chapters, the effort that you put into it really shows!

Great job!