Forbidden(UPD)

[Whitesnow]

Forbidden

[glow=red,2,300]"Reflection"[/glow]

'Reflection in the waters true, but all I see, is you...'

What happens when you walk into the moonlight?
Front Cover:

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Excerpt:

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Remembering that vampires had advanced speed when necessary, I tried to remember what Fallon had told me about how to tap into it, when I heard a howl from inside the forest.

Gasping, I turned to see a boy and girl sprinting towards me-at a faster speed than a vampire-and they weren’t going to stop. Screaming I tried to run from them, but even before I’d started I knew it was in vain, their speed was superior to mine. There was no way out-not even Tristan was here…
I closed my eyes tightly, willing a miracle to happen, before I was hurled to the ground and landed with a thud. Opening my eyes I saw two face staring down at me, pining me to the floor.

“A vampire…” The male hissed to his companion, a vampire in our forest. The young girl stepped forward into the light. They were young, about as old as me and Tristan, but their eyes were nowhere near as friendly. I couldn’t help think of the irony, an immortal vampire about to die. Then the boy was yanked up and hurled across the street.

1.1-"This is Me..."
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1.2-"Innocence"
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1.3-"Reflection"
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[simchickz123]

I read them a little while ago, and now I'm commenting

Both chapters of Forbidden were really great! The excerpt caught my attention so I went and read it hehe Very good plot too! It's cool to read

[Whitesnow]

lol, thanks!
I'm trying to improve it though..hm..

[Whitesnow]

1.3 IS OUT!!