Post by Whitesnow on Apr 10, 2008 11:29:19 GMT 10
[glow=red,2,300]Guardian Angel-Chapter Four[/glow]
"Lie To Me-Part One"
"Don't try and fly so high, your guardian angel is always by your side..."
Death draws in closer, don't leave my love.
You were sent to protect me from up above.
Protect my heart from hurt, don't you see-
You'll break it if you lie to me.
Excerpt:
Dodging the flying kick that came towards my head, I knelt down, swiping my foot under Leo’s legs-bringing him to the floor.
‘Not bad!’ He laughed.
‘Hey! I could beat you any day!’ Since my training had begun, I was so much stronger. Leo stood up, wrapping his arms around me and pulling me in closer.
“Hmm, now that’s not training is it?” I giggled.
He leant in and kissed me. My heart still raced every time he touched me, every time he came in closer.
I sighed; pulling away I remembered my recent discovery of the location of my stolen pendant. Derek. I’d have to train hard to beat him.
‘Leo…’ I started.
‘Yes, yes of course.’ I always seemed to forget he could read minds. Sometimes I wish he couldn’t-it was hard having no thought he couldn’t read.
I lay on my bed, thinking of a way I could get my pendant back. I could always try and track down Derek and steal it back-but I really wanted to try not to battle with him-I had a sinking feeling he would be stronger.
Leo walked in.
‘Hey Sammy!’ he called, ‘got an idea!’
I looked up. ‘What?’ My voice was filled with the hope that I was feeling, that he had found a way to gain back the pendant. I had no idea why this pendant was so important to him-but he had warned me that it should never be lost.
‘I-’ he raised himself up, proudly, ‘am going to go through the gateway an steal back the pendant from Derek.’
‘Not bad!’ He laughed.
‘Hey! I could beat you any day!’ Since my training had begun, I was so much stronger. Leo stood up, wrapping his arms around me and pulling me in closer.
“Hmm, now that’s not training is it?” I giggled.
He leant in and kissed me. My heart still raced every time he touched me, every time he came in closer.
I sighed; pulling away I remembered my recent discovery of the location of my stolen pendant. Derek. I’d have to train hard to beat him.
‘Leo…’ I started.
‘Yes, yes of course.’ I always seemed to forget he could read minds. Sometimes I wish he couldn’t-it was hard having no thought he couldn’t read.
I lay on my bed, thinking of a way I could get my pendant back. I could always try and track down Derek and steal it back-but I really wanted to try not to battle with him-I had a sinking feeling he would be stronger.
Leo walked in.
‘Hey Sammy!’ he called, ‘got an idea!’
I looked up. ‘What?’ My voice was filled with the hope that I was feeling, that he had found a way to gain back the pendant. I had no idea why this pendant was so important to him-but he had warned me that it should never be lost.
‘I-’ he raised himself up, proudly, ‘am going to go through the gateway an steal back the pendant from Derek.’
Front cover:
Chapter Four, Part One-
"Lie to Me"
thesims2.ea.com/exchange/story_detail.php?asset_id=214444
Chapter Three-
"One Last Kiss..."
thesims2.ea.com/exchange/story_detail.php?asset_id=213306
Chapter Two-
"Is this love?":
thesims2.ea.com/exchange/story_detail.php?asset_id=212869
Chapter One-
"Leo":
thesims2.ea.com/exchange/story_detail.php?asset_id=212429
;D
And your right, the chapters are getting better as they go along. They're really well-written too, so well done!
