Post by sunsetsites on Apr 10, 2008 14:18:27 GMT 10
I have a story called Dark Desires. It's available on my website at darkdesires.co.nr/ and at thesims2.ea.com/exchange/story_detail.php?asset_id=211995 Please let me know what you think! Thanx in advance. ;D
Here's an excerpt:
Then, I heard a deep, low, menacing snarl coming from behind the gates of my cousin’s box-shaped backyard. At first, it was faint, but as the seconds ticked by, the growl got louder and louder. My heart thumped and I grasped my chest. Moments later, the growling softened. I quickly let go and sat up.
How silly, I thought. Being afraid of a sound. Ha.
Suddenly, the snarl turned into a titanic, piercing roar.
I thought my eardrums would pop when a massive, auburn figure soared over the pallid fence a few steps in front of me. It leaped on me, pressing my shoulders to the ground. I was breath taken, afraid to even inhale or exhale. My eyes were widened with shock and fear as the furry, piercing black-eyed, animal that was probably about 10 feet tall standing on 2 paws hovered over me, only slightly changing position as it sniffed me.
Abruptly, the creature gazed at me with its chocolate brown eyes with tints of red and gold.
I could have sworn it had black eyes, I thought.
The animal unexpectedly escaped my presence, tearing a few strands of my mid-length, ginger hair, and hurdled over front yard fence. I lied, motionless and stunned.
Was that a…, I thought. I couldn’t even think the words.
I never once in my life believed in mythical creatures or anything of the sort, but as soon as the animal left, I wasn’t so sure.
UPDATE 5-9-08: Still no ch 1.5 on the exchange? nope. ugh. look for it this weekend or monday though. Monday at the latest. I'll stay up till 1 if i have to to finish it.
But on the bright side, if you register on my forum at my website freewebs.com/sunsetsites you can view the sneak peak board which is where ch 2 is hiding. I'll release all of ch 2 on the exchange in a few weeks though if you don't want to register. All of Ch 1.5 is up at darkdesires.co.nr.
Here's an excerpt:
Then, I heard a deep, low, menacing snarl coming from behind the gates of my cousin’s box-shaped backyard. At first, it was faint, but as the seconds ticked by, the growl got louder and louder. My heart thumped and I grasped my chest. Moments later, the growling softened. I quickly let go and sat up.
How silly, I thought. Being afraid of a sound. Ha.
Suddenly, the snarl turned into a titanic, piercing roar.
I thought my eardrums would pop when a massive, auburn figure soared over the pallid fence a few steps in front of me. It leaped on me, pressing my shoulders to the ground. I was breath taken, afraid to even inhale or exhale. My eyes were widened with shock and fear as the furry, piercing black-eyed, animal that was probably about 10 feet tall standing on 2 paws hovered over me, only slightly changing position as it sniffed me.
Abruptly, the creature gazed at me with its chocolate brown eyes with tints of red and gold.
I could have sworn it had black eyes, I thought.
The animal unexpectedly escaped my presence, tearing a few strands of my mid-length, ginger hair, and hurdled over front yard fence. I lied, motionless and stunned.
Was that a…, I thought. I couldn’t even think the words.
I never once in my life believed in mythical creatures or anything of the sort, but as soon as the animal left, I wasn’t so sure.
UPDATE 5-9-08: Still no ch 1.5 on the exchange? nope. ugh. look for it this weekend or monday though. Monday at the latest. I'll stay up till 1 if i have to to finish it.
But on the bright side, if you register on my forum at my website freewebs.com/sunsetsites you can view the sneak peak board which is where ch 2 is hiding. I'll release all of ch 2 on the exchange in a few weeks though if you don't want to register. All of Ch 1.5 is up at darkdesires.co.nr.